Sunday, October 12, 2008

Lung cancer



There are too many kind of cancers. In this paragraph I will talk about lung cancer. Lung cancer is not just one disease but rather a group of diseases , it is an ('uncontrolled' is an adjective so don't use 'an') uncontrolled . Lung cancer begins in the lungs. The lungs are two sponge-like organs in the chest. The right lung has three sections, called lobes. The left lung has two lobes. Lung cancer is a dieses that the leading cause of cancer death for both men and women. So we can see the impotence of this dieses . Also, people who have had lung cancer in the past have a higher chance of having it again, the risk of lung cancer increases with age. Although this dieses should treat in many way by surgery or by medicine . The best way to prevent lung cancer is not to smoke or be around those who do. Young people should not start smoking, and those who already smoke should quit. Everyone, especially babies and children, should be protected from breathing in other people's smoke. While some people believe that air pollution is a major cause of lung cancer . I think that the most important cause of lungs cancer is smoking . Finally , our government try to provide a new treatment to reduce this issue .

1 comment:

Zurob said...

Are you trying to tell em something......
Grade is 4/6 because of 2 errors.
Well written.