Monday, October 13, 2008

Healthy food is less interested than the junk food

Nowadays people like to eat junk foods which is unhealthy food for the human body. It affects the body in a negative way, some people don’t care about what they eat or what does it cover. It has Many problems like, obesity, cancer, and high cholesterol. In researches of 1990, they saw that the hotdog and the cold meat cause pancreas cancer, the oiled food contains cancer diseases, the pizza let the diabetes pressure comes high, and the white bread causes diabetes(all these are the same mistake - try not to use 'the' when speaking generally using singular nouns). But in those days which we are living now, many people suffer from the (delete) bad health that they got, they need to eat healthy food to be a good human body again, like the (delete) broccoli, it has many vitamins, and it helps the body not to be affected by the (delete) cancer. In addition it helps the mood to be good. in my opinion to eat healthy food is better than eating junk food which let the people less exercising and feeling lazy.

1 comment:

Zurob said...

Loads of mistakes. Nine, in fact. This gets a grade of 1/6. You're welcome to try again on this - just make sure youmput 'articles again' in the title of your post.